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Revision Scene 1: “City Fowlk”

Before you read, You’ll notice(for those who read my script) I made the descriptions and actions shorter. So I revised it to make the script easier to read and shortened paragraphs. Enjoy.

INT. Conner’s home NIGHT Scene 1

CONNER enters through the door and notices home is deserted. He turns on one light and sets his skateboard to the side of the door. 

    CONNER

MOM! I’M HOME!….(curious tone) Mom? Ya home?

               MARY-ANN

She’s not home brother… she’s been gone all day. 

Mary-Ann hugs Conner with open arms around his waist.

   CONNER

She’s working late again huh? sigh. Come on sis, I’ll get you something to eat.

Mary-Ann stares confused      

MARY-ANN

YAY! but we don’t have much though. All there is is cereal.

CONNER

Exactly sis, we are gonna have delicious cereal.